Official Poetry Thread - Page 2

133794m3r · 03-20-2008, 06:14 PM

Ok, thanx. I wrote it for my ex.

Volpe Sinatra · 03-20-2008, 06:36 PM

Meh.. Wrote this today in English..

Pathetic

How silly it is to dwell on one thought of all thoughts,
To think of nothing but one being,
One being, one person.
He owns me. How silly.
My thoughts drift no longer,
Wander no longer,
Always on him,
Perpetually on him.
It’s pathetic, really,
How you can be so engrossed with one person,
So consumed by one person
To where nothing else matters
Not flow, nor form,
Not rhythm, nor rhyme,
Not sense.
This poem doesn’t make sense.
Nothing makes sense
Not sun, nor moon,
Not you, nor I,
Nothing. Nothing is sensical.
See, that didn’t even make sense.
Nothing does. Only him.
Only how I feel about him.
Now that makes perfect sense.
But the only downfall to it all
is that he’s conquered me.
He’s conquered my heart,
But he doesn’t even know.
He doesn’t even know that
He has full control of me.
See? Pathetic.

Toast · 03-20-2008, 06:38 PM

nice to see you posted it here. Thanks for the intrest in High Q,
I like your Poem.

133794m3r · 03-20-2008, 06:41 PM

zombii kitten, wow that was awesome.

Volpe Sinatra · 03-20-2008, 07:04 PM

Meh.. it was alright. =/

133794m3r · 03-20-2008, 07:09 PM

but alright to you is teh awesome to me. I mean I rarely write poetry. The entry I did today was because I got really bored in Trig Class.

Trogdor · 03-20-2008, 09:12 PM

very nice zombii, it had a good flow to it

EndUnknown · 03-20-2008, 09:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jon

Dark Whole's sounds more of a rap.

it originally was. I rap on occasion.

Quote:

Originally Posted by zombii kitten

Meh.. Wrote this today in English..

Don't Mind Me, I'm Just Rambling

How silly it is to dwell on one thought of all thoughts,
To think of nothing but one being,
One being, one person.
He owns me. How silly.
My thoughts drift no longer,
Wander no longer,
Always on him,
Perpetually on him.
It�s pathetic, really,
How you can be so engrossed with one person,
So consumed by one person
To where nothing else matters
Not flow, nor form,
Not rhythm, nor rhyme,
Not sense.
This poem doesn�t make sense.
Nothing makes sense
Not sun, nor moon,
Not you, nor I,
Nothing. Nothing is sensical.
See, that didn�t even make sense.
Nothing does. Only him.
Only how I feel about him.
Now that makes perfect sense.
But the only downfall to it all
is that he�s conquered me.
He�s conquered my heart,
But he doesn�t even know.
He doesn�t even know that
He has full control of me.
See? Pathetic.

that..... was.... BEAUTIFUL! :begins slow clap:

133794m3r · 03-20-2008, 10:59 PM

Finishes slow clap.

mr.handsomeman · 03-21-2008, 01:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BobtheWalrus

Wow, those from all y'all, are really good-
here's mine-

Roses are blue
Violets are red
I ate a banana
And moldy bread

probably the greatest poem ever written in history.

killpineapple · 03-21-2008, 02:47 AM

a Zune haiku off the top of my head

Zune is always on
Tunes, vids, keeping me un-bored
If it only it cooked

Toast · 03-21-2008, 02:08 PM

nice very nice all of them and yes Bobs was intense.
Zombii you're too hard on yourself. it was great.
And kill i wish it cooked too, but thats a different time, nice haiku though

133794m3r · 03-21-2008, 02:53 PM

oh yeah, haiku!

Volpe Sinatra · 03-24-2008, 12:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZuneNerd

Zombii you're too hard on yourself. it was great.

=/ Maybe I'm too modest..

Thank you for the praise, guys. I generally don't like my own work, whether it be my writing or my gfx, but you guys have made me rather proud of this last piece, both proud and ashamed. =/

**PoN** · 03-24-2008, 07:08 AM

zombii it was great gooodjob

03-20-2008, 06:14 PM	#21 (permalink)
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Volpe Sinatra [Psychotic Synchypnotic] GFX Crew Moderator Elite Zuner Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Minneapolis, MN / Muskegon, MI Posts: 2,081 Reputation: 284 $zB: 1891 Donate Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Meh.. Wrote this today in English.. Pathetic How silly it is to dwell on one thought of all thoughts, To think of nothing but one being, One being, one person. He owns me. How silly. My thoughts drift no longer, Wander no longer, Always on him, Perpetually on him. It’s pathetic, really, How you can be so engrossed with one person, So consumed by one person To where nothing else matters Not flow, nor form, Not rhythm, nor rhyme, Not sense. This poem doesn’t make sense. Nothing makes sense Not sun, nor moon, Not you, nor I, Nothing. Nothing is sensical. See, that didn’t even make sense. Nothing does. Only him. Only how I feel about him. Now that makes perfect sense. But the only downfall to it all is that he’s conquered me. He’s conquered my heart, But he doesn’t even know. He doesn’t even know that He has full control of me. See? Pathetic. __________________ zB's Zewb Mother, GFX Czarina and resident crazy (one of the many) To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. [ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. \| To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. \| To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ] Be sure you are familiar with our To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. . The reputation system: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Giving +rep: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spot rule violations? To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. . Need a sig or av? Request one To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ! New members! Don't forget to To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ! (Psstt.. 5pt +rep to all new members to introduce themselves! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ) Last edited by Volpe Sinatra : 03-24-2008 at 08:32 PM. Reason: Retitled

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Volpe Sinatra [Psychotic Synchypnotic] GFX Crew Moderator Elite Zuner Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Minneapolis, MN / Muskegon, MI Posts: 2,081 Reputation: 284 $zB: 1891 Donate Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Meh.. it was alright. =/ __________________ zB's Zewb Mother, GFX Czarina and resident crazy (one of the many) To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. [ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. \| To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. \| To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ] Be sure you are familiar with our To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. . The reputation system: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Giving +rep: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spot rule violations? To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. . Need a sig or av? Request one To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ! New members! Don't forget to To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ! (Psstt.. 5pt +rep to all new members to introduce themselves! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 0 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. )

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