New Official zB Poetry Thread

[lonewolf85]

He is red and black,
now he is very fluffy,
he is my red fox.

by lonewolf85

[daxspark]

LOL see my sig for my favorite poem. 1/2 credit to Emily Dickinson, 1/2 credit to whatever Valve employee changed the original (which is good too

EDIT: Wow, ima n00b, I just remembered Henry Wadsworth Longfellow wrote the original ("The Reaper and the Flowers"), not Dickinson. That's what being out of school does to me, I guess. I was thinking of Dickinson's "Because I Could Not Stop For Death," another one of my favorites. Sorry for not posting the whole poems if that's what I'm supposed to do, but they're easy to look up if you want to.

[Charge]

To a certain Friend, who helps when (s)he is needed.

Friends, can be found
in the most unlikliest places

but friends can also be found
within your own imagination

Friends from afar
are the closest to your heart

Friends close to you
are the ones affected

Just remember
A friend is a friend

No matter who they are

And no matter who they are
They will listen

Trust
And they will trust

Learn
And you will be the Teacher

Try
And they will try

Love
And they will love

Friends

[moyamoya]

Originally Posted by Charge

Its a bit long, but was a concurrent example of everyday life, each stint written a different day.
A Long Time Ago by ~Charge09 on deviantART

Im fed up, i dont
want to be in this "happy ever after" story
chuck the book at the floor
leave it with a puzzling end
but do you listen
.
being the person you looked at
but didnt bother talking to
sometimes the sun shines and we feel alive
the wind blows and we feel the force
but not me, but do you listen
.
I fall at the smallest hurdles
Dont Tell me. Im falling
apart at the seams. Never
knowing knowing what to dream
.
i then realise, its to late
i then feel lies, its my fate
the congregated enemies
watch me swamp my memories
.
but they never saw
the person inside the lies
the truth and eyes
come between our lives
.
People watch me weep
swallow the pain
seering pain through the heart
but you could never see
.
The willows creek as my
limbs fall apart into
your dreams and
fly away, never to be seen
.
As i grow old the
dreams grow longer, wiser
I seem but fade away
I bled for you
.
The fire burns brightly
in my eyes, you recognise
your true lies in heart
and depth you see
.
People scower at your
expense. you fly away
into the clouds, and
through our dreams
.
You call for me and
i just fade away
watching you fall
not knowing at all
.
Im just a show
sold out only to shadows
hidden in the depths
of your true secrets
.
Everything you say to me
is just another migrane
everytime you look at me
is just another day
.
Am i not trusted?
falling down into
your arms in heart
the bones shatter
.
The window pand falls
the heart drops cold
the silence is broken
with you being told
.
Lights shine through
your clever disguise
and into the darkness
the light shines through
.
All senses fail
and your heart beats faster
nothing but the moonlight shines
not ever your love
.
The world crashes around
me and you fall down
the sky turns blue, I
thought i knew you

charge, i'm setting that to music... is that allright with you?

[Charge]

Thats fine with me. You gonna sing it or something?

[moyamoya]

it shall become an emoish punk song... and yea i will sing it... aiming for something close to A Skylit Drive...

[Charge]

No screamo, please.

[Jaistu]

I enjoy reading this thread Nice collection we are getting

[Charge]

Yea pretty good. Im writing another one tonight.

[Jaistu]

Cant wait to read it

[Charge]

Just wrote it quick for my Facebook Status.

"There is the Circus outside. You are the Ringleader, and Im just a Clown.
There is a menace out there. Just staring into abyss. Not even a frown.
There is a storm growing. Consuming Darkness. Engulfing towns.
But there is love here. Growing. And its making me drown"


Revised

"There is the Circus outside. You are the Ringleader, and Im just a Clown.
There is a menace out there. You are the Abyss. I make no sound.
There is a storm growing. You are the Darkness. I am the town.
But there is love here. Growing. And its making me drown"


ADDED

"Let the floodgates open as I walk down memory lane.
The smiles return and the quiver remains.

I can see you walking away now, its ok your gone.
Now that were over we can but only move on.

Its a time of despair as rain hits my face.
And all I can think about is that empty space.

Im happy now in this place full of friends.
Ill move forward following their trends."

[Charge]

Am I the only one?


In every way
In every turn we take
In every meaning
In every truth

There is you

In every heart
and soul
In every child
and mother
In every day and night
I stand before you

As me
And as only me

And as dusk hits the rolling hills
And as torches burn
I will be who I am
And will never change.

So in every day
every hour
every minute
every second
I hold my hand out

Take me
For who I am
And I Will never change.

[Jaistu]

I love it Charge

[Charge]

New One. BTW Fox = Ex (as ex has ginger hair..like a fox)

Willows Weep
and Foxes sleep
while down down deep
Im yours to keep

But everyday
While Im awake
The fox still sleeps
And again I wait

And every night
while im awake
the fox runs wild
Its hard to take

But im strong
and Im bold
and im yours to keep
but not yours to hold

So watch me wake
while the fox still sleeps
And turn the leaf
with the warmth it keeps

Im on my way
To holding my own
breaking the mould
and turning old

This is who I will never be
The way I am now
The way I used to be
Is what I wish I was now

Willows Weep
and foxes sleep
Im yours down deep
But not yours to keep

[J2800]

Charge, you write the most awesome poetry on zB. Good, good stuff.

[Charge]

=] Its cuz my head is so screwed up I can write crap like that lol

Talks

Long Walks
Long Talks
Make the heart grow fonder
Make you always wonder

They help you through
Those tough times you've had
And comfort you for the ones ahead

Its nice to know
There is someone out there
to talk to
who will listen
who will smile
who will laugh

Just to wish
Just to hold out your hand and they hold yours
To look into there eyes and just see there smile growing

Talks
The thing you need the most
Walks
To put to rest a busy mind
Love
The only thing to bring us together
Time
The only thing that could last forever

[xCyberFang]

Here is my newest poem, i thought id post it on zB. maybe ill post some older ones later on, i dont want to make a big ass post of all of my poetry (i have like 30 some poems lol).

its a poem i wrote while listening to Evanescence.
It reflects on how society misjudges people and criticizes people about stuff that sometimes the people never wanted to do in the first place, and how common “what happened” “tell me about it” questions may be very hard to answer if they did not like what happened.

A memory haunts me
of a cold night
I was forced into sex
with an evil guy

he got me pregnant
a fatherless kid
18 years to raise
what should be his

I try to forget
about that day
so that I try to hide
so it goes away

When I soon forget it
It's thrown back at me
mixed up rumors
and marking memories

these people think
that I am a whore
when they do not know
how he was born

I hide the fact
that I did not say yes
that I did not have a choice
that I was not ready yet

These rumors go around
that I did say yes
that I am a slut
that I wanted sex

they asked me who it was
I say I do not know
they say i should
since I gave him a show

now forced to explain
the story every time
in hope that these rumors
will soon eventually die

the rumors are now gone
but is this memory?
It is worse than before
stuck with me for eternity

[xCyberFang]

It once was here
it once was clear
of the untamed pain
conjured from my fear

i seen it great
i seen it bright
of that one
brutal night

i was in the forest
on my knees
pleeding to a beast
behind the trees

he stood there dark
he stood there still
my entire life
at his will

he told me this
if i dare move
i will only make it
until red moon

i turned around
ran for my life
a sudden flash
i couldnt fight

in the same place
he still glared his hate
straight at my eyes
thinking up my fate

my feet went up
i was off the ground
being thrown upon
a hot red cloud

watching the night go
time was so slow
the beast stood right next
with his eyes of fire glow

the time slowly came
the moon turned red
that very minute
blood rushed to my head

my eyes explode
my jaw breaks to bits
my fingers melt
upon my bloody lips

sudden snakes
broke threw the cloud
wrapped upon my legs
tossing me to the ground

The snakes body
curled along my body
teeth broke in my neck
and spat venom violently

A mysterious wolf
Jumped into the sky
electric bolts
trailed his body lines

with a loud howl
a strong lip curl
he fought against
this beast to twirl

dizyness in his vision
he threw fists in the air
the wolf serpent tongued
fire in his glare

closely to the beast
his fangs broke into his neck
his claws thrown on his face
the beasts strength came a wreck

a sudden fall
a smash on the ground
the wolf healed me
and kept me safe and sound

my eyes were restored
my blood was refilled
my bones put together
like wood being drilled

to this day
i remember his special name
this flying beast
known as CyberFang

[Charge]

Free - Charge

When your gone
Im Free
Free of this love
Free of your hold on me

When your not here
I can breathe
I can shut my eyes without seeing your face
I can concentrate
I can live my life
I can smile
I can be me

But

I don't want that
I don't want to be free
I want to feel encased by your love
I want you to hold me

I want you to take my breath away
I want to see your face when I shut my eyes
I want you to make me lose my train of thought
I want to live our life together
I want to smile bigger than ever before
I want to be us

I don't want to be free
But when I'm with you, I fly

[xCyberFang]

@Charge, thats a great poem

--------
Heres another rather older poem of mine i wrote last school year.

Before anyone asks, lol, i dont get abused xD. i just wanted a deep subject to write about, as of all my poems are aimed to be.

I Loved You Daddy - CyberFang

i loved you daddy
you said you loved me too
we shared the same thoughts
you and mommy too, both of you do

you guys loved me
you were glad to see me when i was born
i remember your smile daddy
oh and your hug was warm

i want to be able to have fun with you
and be able to tell my friends we did that together
i really wanted to ride bikes together and with mom too
i wanted to make the fun times last forever

oh dear, daddy. whats wrong?
why are you looking at me like that
did i do something bad? if so im sorry
no daddy, no. please dont grab the bat!

what ever happened to the times
that all my punishments were just spankings
am i supposed to get pain more now that im 9?
i try not to do anything bad anymore, cause i hate the gripping

mommy? whats wrong with daddy
is it from all those bottles that have been appearing?
why does daddy drink all that bad stuff?
he once told me himself that its bad for me

if its bad for me, then why does he do it?
is it that im not normal?
mommy? mommy? no not you too!
please mom, ill be quiet and not ask any more!

im scared mommy, daddy has a bat
he wants to punish me, i hope you didnt do anything bad too
no mommy, please put down the gun
all i ever did was tried to love dad and you!